Ming Loughrey
Wednesday, July 20, 2011
Can i get some opinions on my latest short story? (FIRST PARAGRPAHS)?
first of all,,,, BRAVO. The first sentence has many adjectives that makes me want to read all of it, which i did. Spelling, sun's *rays*. Thats all i could pick up. Well done!
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